Eliot Ness

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Eliot Ness (Scenesys ID: 264)
"You think, eventually, that nothing can disturb you and that your nerves are impregnable. Yet, looking down at that familiar face, I realized that death is something to which we never become calloused."
Full Name: Eliot Ness
Gender: Male
Species: Human
Theme: (OC) Assassin's Creed: The Untouchables-1R
Function: US Treasury Agent
Status: Dropped
Factional Information
Faction: Syndicate (5-Lookout)
Groups: Syndicate Network
Other Information
Physical Age: 20s-30s Actual Age: 26
Still Aging? Yes Voice Actor: Kevin Costner
Height: 5'9" Weight: 170
Hair Color: Light Brown Eye Color: Hazel
Theme Song:


Eliot Ness is a US Treasury Agent dispatched to the city of Chicago with a team of Federal Agents to enforce Prohibition. Hand-picked by Ness himself, the group of men are known loosely as "The Untouchables" due to their strong conviction and dedication to the task, with Ness as a paragon of this very value. Serious, determined, and a bit naive in his morality, Ness leads The Untouchables in raids and arrests upon members of Al Capone's Chicago mafia, attempting to disassemble his entire operation from the ground up. Many attempts to bribe Ness and his men have been made, and none have succeeded. While Prohibition may be unpopular, Chicago is beginning to look to The Untouchables as its only hope to end the violent reign of Al Capone, and other cities are looking to them for help with their own mafia problems.










Highly Wanted Man: While a law enforcement officer, Eliot Ness's position and his occupation have made him many enemies on both sides of the law. There are almost as many corrupt police officers as their are criminals that would like to see him dead. Law Enforcement officials outside his own personal team are just as likely to leave him for dead or send him into a trap set by the mafia. It's the major drawback of being the virtuous one in a corrupt system.

Laced Up: Eliot Ness, the man, holds himself to a rigid code of conduct and ethics that he applies into nearly every facet of his life. This means he can be inflexible, or even overtly confrontational, when an action requires him to go against that code. He holds himself responsible for all the consequences and for the lives of each of his men.

Mortal: Despite his extensive training, his equipment, and his skills, Eliot Ness is still just a normal man. Without proper protection, he is susceptible to poison, severe injury, radiation, and other such things. He is very resilient and in peak human health, but not invincible like many people in the Multiverse. (Extended Healtimes)

Government Agent: Eliot Ness is supplied by, and therefore behold to, the Bureau of Prohibition. Their orders and rules are what he has to abide by if he wishes to continue to receive their support and act with their authority. This can create problems if he decides to act outside their rules and guidelines.

Wife and Child: One of his greatest weaknesses, Eliot Ness is a married man with a wife and child. Targeting them or threatening their lives is likely to cause him to lose much of his rationality in lieu of more impulsive and reactionary desires. (OOC: Please ask consent before exploiting this one too much)


Title Date Scene Summary
What Lies Beneath August 18th, 2015 The woman known as Duet Fortuna seeks something under the Imperial Palace
Airfield Assault April 14th, 2015 Eliot Ness recruits numerous people to assault an airfield owned by Capone.
Secrets Revealed January 24th, 2015 Pinkie, Homura and Eliot discuss matters.
Sault Ste. Marie Raid January 23rd, 2015 Acquire guns, deal with gangsters, profit.
Laugh Clown, Laugh January 19th, 2015 Maud is chased into the depths of the catacombs of Baltimare for a final showdown. Where the truth is revealed.
A Clandestine Meeting January 13th, 2015 Ness and Homura meet with Pinkie in disguise to discuss matters.
Arlequine and Trottumbina January 11th, 2015 The source of the Laughing Dead is found. She is not very funny.
Planning the Next Move December 4th, 2014 Eliot Ness summons his various allies to plan his next moves against Capone.
Station Under Siege November 21st, 2014 Eliot Ness's station comes under attack by an army of criminals seeking to end his operations in Chicago permanently.
More Questions. Any Answers November 9th, 2014 Further investigations throughout Equestria... But they only provide new obstacles to face.
Act While In Delirium October 28th, 2014 A church is investigated by several people in order to find clues on a grisly murder.
The Trotting Dead October 2nd, 2014 Where even the dead laugh, only more questions arise.
Totally Awkward September 26th, 2014 Ness and Twilight finally recover from their injuries and have a chat.
Laugh While They're Dizzy September 22nd, 2014 Pinkamena attacks Twilight where and when she least expects it. Right on her front door.
Gonna ave a Par-TAY! August 18th, 2014 Pinkie and friends set up a carnival for people to attend and have fun! Of course things don't always go right.
Secret Meeting in the Park June 30th, 2014 Eliot Ness calls Pinkamena and Homura for a meeting.
Secret of Stalliongrad June 29th, 2014 Hints and clues have lead to the knowledge that something big is happening in Stalliongrad. Investigation happens!
Meet the Cakes June 28th, 2014 Eliot calls Homura as security to investigate mysteries in the new Equestria.
Smiles Get! June 23rd, 2014 Pinkamena makes her debut in her greatest capering attempt to bring down House Moon and Star. But can she pull it off?
Manehattan Murder Most Foul! June 21st, 2014 The Multiverse's keenest minds are called by House Moon and Star to discretely look into the killings of a squad of royal guard.
Avenging the Dead June 20th, 2014 Attempting to avenge the loss of one of his Untouchables, and in retaliation for the violence of the Capone Mafia, Eliot Ness will be making his first truly decisive move against the Chicago Outfit. On the border of Minnesota and Canada, Ness will lead a group of people to attempt to intercept a smuggling convoy led by Walter Payne.


Title Date Scene Summary
Ness's Journal 8-18-29 August 18th, 2014 An excerpt from Eliot Ness's personal journal.
Wandering the Streets (Eliot Ness) June 22nd, 2014 Eliot Ness ponders on his first visit to a world outside his own. He resolves to help it the only way he knows how.