The Great Work - Revision history

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 |Audience=Everyone
 |Genre=Mixed
-|Events=
+|Events====Prologue...===
 ===Prologue...===
 In reality it all started when Medusa Gorgon was seemingly killed by D in the icy north of her own world in January. It was all quiet until...
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 After much work it was time to let the essence of Pius's youngest sister join with the body he had prepared, yet nobody were expecting the results that happened as Medusa Gorgon was brought back to life. In the struggle that ensued Pius was heavily injured and taken away, while the Confederates ensured Medusa's escape by taking her back to the Citadel.
 |Info=Pius's state is still uncertain...
-|State=Current
+|State=Finished
 }}

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 |Audience=Everyone
 |Genre=Mixed
-|Events====Catalyst===
+|Events=
 The world of Danbur has unified some months ago, and a distress signal is sent out from the outskirts of a village in the countryside. Those who responded met with Pius Athanor, a master alchemist who was at odds with the villagers due to him neglecting his work due to being consumed with a special project of his; his Magnum Opus.
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 ===Stage Multiplication===
 Pius wishes to extend his gratitude to those who have helped him so far with his Magnum Opus. How? By hosting a feast at the Athanor Mansion!
 ===Stage Projection===
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          (The Clockwork Quartet - The Doctor's Wife ~ https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VHEJrXPvU5s)
-It is time for the finale of the Great Work. After weeks of searching and preparation, it is time for the Magnum Opus to be completed. Will alchemy be victorious in the face of death? Will everything go as planned? Has it all been worth it? These questions and many more will be answered.
+After much work it was time to let the essence of Pius's youngest sister join with the body he had prepared, yet nobody were expecting the results that happened as Medusa Gorgon was brought back to life. In the struggle that ensued Pius was heavily injured and taken away, while the Confederates ensured Medusa's escape by taking her back to the Citadel.
-Open to all regardless of faction, players from prior scenes are encouraged to join. Feds are strongly encouraged to sign up!
+|Info=Pius's state is still uncertain...
-|Info=Pius has stated openly on channels that he welcomes any who wishes to help, or even to discuss his Magnum Opus.
 |State=Current
 }}

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 Luckily they were successful, and they managed to assist Pius and Diane in combining the parts. Now what remains is only to wait.
 ===Stage Multiplication===
 Pius wishes to extend his gratitude to those who have helped him so far with his Magnum Opus. How? By hosting a feast at the Athanor Mansion!
-Social scene open to all regardless of faction.
+==FUTURE SCENES==
 ===Stage Projection===

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 ===Stage Congelation===
 Staren and Pius discuss the Magnum Opus and just who Pius seeks to revive. In addition Staren reveals his own immortality and makes an interesting offer to the Athanor siblings.
 ===Stage Fermentation===
-Pius seeks help with preparing the reagents and getting things ready for the final stages of his Magnum Opus when something unexpected happens!
+The time came for the next part of the construction of the human body for the Magnum Opus. Many of the components were finished, but it had to all be placed together in a timely fashion. Sadly an interruption came in the form of a villager, and the Elites had to rush to relocate a whole workshop full of human parts and alchemic materials.
-A mixed scene with both conflict and alchemic science, open for all regardless of faction.
+Luckily they were successful, and they managed to assist Pius and Diane in combining the parts. Now what remains is only to wait.
 ===Stage Multiplication===

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 ===Stage Projection===
 Her body is destroyed
-But what nature has neglected the fruit of modern science shall provide
+        Her body is destroyed
-And I've broken every code of practice
+        But what nature has neglected the fruit of modern science shall provide
-But for my love I'd shift the planet's axis
+        And I've broken every code of practice
-She'll return to me when she's been repaired
+        But for my love I'd shift the planet's axis
-She'll live again
+        She'll return to me when she's been repaired
-And I swear I can see the gleam
+        She'll live again
-In her eyes amidst the new machines
+        And I swear I can see the gleam
-And at night I can hear her whisper...
+        In her eyes amidst the new machines
-         (- from https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VHEJrXPvU5s)
+        And at night I can hear her whisper...
 It is time for the finale of the Great Work. After weeks of searching and preparation, it is time for the Magnum Opus to be completed. Will alchemy be victorious in the face of death? Will everything go as planned? Has it all been worth it? These questions and many more will be answered.

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 ====A venom that can corrode platinum====
-Not yet acquired.
+Hana led a party consisting of Pius, Diane, Kagenash, Hiei, Rory White, Staren, Lyria Mason and Mandy to a forest where they met a moth monster who had some strong venom that he would only share with them if they helped him gather food for his family. Thanks to Kagenashi and Lyria this was easily accompished.
 |Info=Pius has stated openly on channels that he welcomes any who wishes to help, or even to discuss his Magnum Opus.
 |State=Current
 }}

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 |Events=
-==Catalyst==
+===Catalyst===
 The world of Danbur has unified some months ago, and a distress signal is sent out from the outskirts of a village in the countryside. Those who responded met with Pius Athanor, a master alchemist who was at odds with the villagers due to him neglecting his work due to being consumed with a special project of his; his Magnum Opus.
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 The Elites agreed to aid him with his task as long as he promised to uphold his duties to the village, which Pius happily agreed to. There was also the demand that Pius be honest and let those involved know the full nature of his Magnum Opus.
-==Stage Calcination==
+===Stage Calcination===
 At a later meeting he called Elites to him to discuss the reagents he will need for his Magnum Opus.
 In order to create a body that is strong enough to house the essence of a departed person, he needs strong reagents.
-==The Reagents==
+===The Reagents===
 ====A tooth from a magical creature that does not eat meat====
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 ====Essence of Lightning====
-Not yet acquired.
+Diane led a small group consisting of Mandy Rose, Rory White, Lyria Mason and Hiei to the coastal city of Emis, where an unnatural storm had been raging for days. Upon arriving there they learned that the storm was sentient, and it took the form of an elemental that they chased around before they were able to gather lightning from it.
 ====A pure mineral that does not melt====
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 ====A venom that can corrode platinum====
 |Info=Pius has stated openly on channels that he welcomes any who wishes to help, or even to discuss his Magnum Opus.
 |State=Current
 }}