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 ==Weapons==
-'''CAEL HAMMER:''' The weapon of the Masons, builders and architects of Caelondia. A two-handed wooden sledgehammer with a metal face, suited for pounding nails, flagstones and heads. Its weight makes it best-used from a still, standing position.
+'''CAEL HAMMER:''' The weapon of the Masons, builders and architects of Caelondia. Heavy-duty hammers such as these constructed Caelondia's famous Rippling Walls, and protected from elements and foes alike.
-'''FANG REPEATER:''' The weapon of the Trappers, hunters and farmers of Caelondia. Based on an Ura design made from the skeleton of Spurfish. By using pistons powered by Gasfella gas and meesegut string, it can rapidly and silently propel Spurfish teeth.
+'''FANG REPEATER:''' The weapon of the Trappers, hunters and farmers of Caelondia. A munition chamber fashioned from an unlucky beast gives a distinct silhouette to these silent repeating rifles, once favored by Ura hunters.
-'''BULLHEAD SHIELD:''' The shield of the Menders, medics and repairmen of Caelondia. This one was not made for The Kid, making it more of a tower shield in his hands. Made from both leather and metal, it can not only soak up blows, but also used to bash enemies as a counterattack, or deflect projectiles.
+'''BULLHEAD SHIELD:''' The shield of the Menders, medics and repairmen of Caelondia. A tower shield made in the image of Pyth, Menders would use these to protect themselves and the wounded.
-'''BREAKER'S BOW:''' The weapon of the Breakers, couriers and messengers of Caelondia. A lightweight yet high-tensile bow, it is capable of loosing shots that can penetrate through multiple targets. All the arrows are designed so that one part of the shaft is slimmer than the rest, suited for tying messages around without compromising the aerodynamics.
+'''BREAKER'S BOW:''' The weapon of the Breakers, couriers and messengers of Caelondia. With these durable lightweight bows, Caelondian Breaker divisions reconnoitered the farthest reaches of the land in the name of their City.
-'''WAR MACHETE:''' The weapon of the Gravers, fugitive hunters and executioners of Caelondia. This wicked blade is based on a traditional Ura weapon. It can be swung rapidly, and is aerodynamic enough to be thrown. Ironically, it saw the most use in keeping Ura refugees in line in the wake of the Ura-Caelondia war.
+'''WAR MACHETE:''' The weapon of the Gravers, spies and executioners of Caelondia. The Ura once nearly sacked the City with these savage blades, which gave the City's missionaries a healthy respect for them.
-'''TRIP MINES:''' These mines are a product of the ingenuity of the Mancers and the incendiary knowledge of the Cinders. Winding the key simultaneously arms the mine and keeps it in check. A small jolt from a nearby footstep is all it takes for it to unwind, causing the mine to explode.
+'''TRIP MINES:''' These mines are a product of the ingenuity of the Mancers and the incendiary knowledge of the Cinders. A complex booby trap rigged to blow as soon as any foes draw near. A spring-loaded triggering mechanism ensures the user's safety.

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 |Groups=
 |Quote=“The Pantheon challenges us, so we may show our true worth. But this... Calamity. I wonder if I may have met my match.”
-|PAge=19
+|PAge=17
-|AAge=19
+|AAge=17
 |Aging=Yes
 |Height=5'9"

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 '''RIDE THE WIND:''' In Caelondia, people would travel from place to place with Skyways, paths of strong wind high in the air. As a native, The Kid has become skilled in floating and moving through the air through most means, but he tends to have trouble with landings.
-|Assets='''THE BASTION:''' The Bastion is the evacuation point for The City, where everyone was to go in case of trouble. It was not complete at the time of the Calamity, but its true capabilities can be awakened with Cores. At present, it has an Armory, a Distillery and a Forge. It also has a Skyway access panel so The Kid can venture beyond it.
+|Assets='''THE BASTION:''' The Bastion is the evacuation point for The City, where everyone was to go in case of trouble. It was not complete at the time of the Calamity, but its true capabilities can be awakened with Cores. At present, it has an Arsenal, a Distillery and a Forge. It also has a Skyway access panel so The Kid can venture beyond it.
 '''THE ARSENAL:''' While The Kid is capable with all the weapons of Caelondia’s military, he does not own them all yet. Any he finds on his journey, he stores here.

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 '''CAEL HAMMER:''' The weapon of the Masons, builders and architects of Caelondia. A two-handed wooden sledgehammer with a metal face, suited for pounding nails, flagstones and heads. Its weight makes it best-used from a still, standing position.
-'''FANG REPEATER:''' The weapon of the Trappers, hunters and farmers of Caelondia. Based on an Ura design made from the skeleton of Spurfish. By using pistons powered by Stinkfella gas and meesegut string, it can rapidly and silently propel Spurfish teeth.
+'''FANG REPEATER:''' The weapon of the Trappers, hunters and farmers of Caelondia. Based on an Ura design made from the skeleton of Spurfish. By using pistons powered by Gasfella gas and meesegut string, it can rapidly and silently propel Spurfish teeth.
 '''BULLHEAD SHIELD:''' The shield of the Menders, medics and repairmen of Caelondia. This one was not made for The Kid, making it more of a tower shield in his hands. Made from both leather and metal, it can not only soak up blows, but also used to bash enemies as a counterattack, or deflect projectiles.

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 ==Weapons==
-'''CAEL HAMMER:''' The weapon of the Masons, builders of Caelondia. A two-handed wooden sledgehammer with a metal face, suited for pounding in nails and flagstones both. Its weight makes it best-used from a standing position.
+'''CAEL HAMMER:''' The weapon of the Masons, builders and architects of Caelondia. A two-handed wooden sledgehammer with a metal face, suited for pounding nails, flagstones and heads. Its weight makes it best-used from a still, standing position.
-'''FANG REPEATER:''' The weapon of the Trappers, hunters and farmers for Caelondia. Based on an Ura design made from the skeleton of Spurfish. By using pistons powered by Stinkfella gas and Spurfish gut string, it can rapidly and silently propel Spurfish teeth.
+'''FANG REPEATER:''' The weapon of the Trappers, hunters and farmers of Caelondia. Based on an Ura design made from the skeleton of Spurfish. By using pistons powered by Stinkfella gas and meesegut string, it can rapidly and silently propel Spurfish teeth.
-'''BULLHEAD SHIELD:''' The shield of the Menders, medics and repairmen for Caelondia. This one was not made for The Kid, making it more of a tower shield in his hands. Made from both leather and metal, it can not only soak up blows, but also used to bash enemies as a counterattack, or deflect projectiles.
+'''BULLHEAD SHIELD:''' The shield of the Menders, medics and repairmen of Caelondia. This one was not made for The Kid, making it more of a tower shield in his hands. Made from both leather and metal, it can not only soak up blows, but also used to bash enemies as a counterattack, or deflect projectiles.
-'''BREAKER'S BOW:''' The weapon of the Breakers, couriers of Caelondia. A lightweight yet high-tensile bow, it is capable of loosing shots that can penetrate through multiple targets.
+'''BREAKER'S BOW:''' The weapon of the Breakers, couriers and messengers of Caelondia. A lightweight yet high-tensile bow, it is capable of loosing shots that can penetrate through multiple targets. All the arrows are designed so that one part of the shaft is slimmer than the rest, suited for tying messages around without compromising the aerodynamics.
-'''WAR MACHETE:''' The weapon of the Gravers, Caelondia's long arm of the law. This wicked blade is based on a traditional Ura weapon. It can be swung rapidly, and is aerodynamic enough to be thrown.
+'''WAR MACHETE:''' The weapon of the Gravers, fugitive hunters and executioners of Caelondia. This wicked blade is based on a traditional Ura weapon. It can be swung rapidly, and is aerodynamic enough to be thrown. Ironically, it saw the most use in keeping Ura refugees in line in the wake of the Ura-Caelondia war.

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 {{CharacterOnlyLogs
 |NameOnMUSH=The Kid
-|Color=#0099FF
+|Color=#FFFFFF
 |Char_id=798
 |Img=http://i.imgur.com/qVa3uEf.jpg

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	'''FUNCTIONAL ALCOHOLIC:''' The Kid has served ten years on the Rippling Walls, five more than anyone else in history. Up on the Wall, powerful spirits are served to keep the workers going. After ten years of this, The Kid has become reliant on drink to keep going. After a long period without it, he will exhibit classical withdrawal symptoms.		'''FUNCTIONAL ALCOHOLIC:''' The Kid has served ten years on the Rippling Walls, five more than anyone else in history. Up on the Wall, powerful spirits are served to keep the workers going. After ten years of this, The Kid has become reliant on drink to keep going. After a long period without it, he will exhibit classical withdrawal symptoms.
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		+	\|Weapons='''CAEL HAMMER:''' The weapon of the Masons, builders of Caelondia. A two-handed wooden sledgehammer with a metal face, suited for pounding in hammers and flagstones both. Its weight makes it best-used from a standing position.
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		+	'''FANG REPEATER:''' The weapon of the Trappers, hunters and farmers for Caelondia. Based on an Ura design made from the skeleton of Spurfish. By using pistons powered by Stinkfella gas and Spurfish gut string, it can rapidly and silently propel Spurfish teeth.
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		+	'''BULLHEAD SHIELD:''' The shield of the Menders, medics and repairmen for Caelondia. This one was not made for The Kid, making it more of a tower shield in his hands. Made from both leather and metal, it can soak up blows and also deflect projectiles.
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		+	'''BREAKER'S BOW:''' The weapon of the Breakers, couriers of Caelondia. A lightweight yet high-tensile bow, it is capable of loosing shots that can penetrate through multiple targets.
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		+	'''WAR MACHETE:''' The weapon of the Gravers, Caelondia's long arm of the law. This wicked blade is based on a traditional Ura weapon. It can be swung rapidly, but is aerodynamic enough to be thrown.

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 |Color=#0099FF
 |Char_id=798
-|Img=http://i.imgur.com/HiIaaH0.png
+|Img=http://i.imgur.com/qVa3uEf.jpg
 |FullName=The Kid
 |Gender=Male